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« Thread Started on Jul 25, 2006, 2:52pm » | |
I have already posted this on The Keybladers Haven. It is purely fiction.
Prologue to KH2 Epilogue (Where Kairi gives the King's letter to Sora and Riku)
Kairi smiled a little after Sora handed her the good luck charm back. She remembered giving it to Sora, in the Hollow Bastion Tunnels. She remembered after Sora left to go defeat Ansem, a figure approached her. She had turned around to see that Leon and the others were gone. Apparently they had gone to Merlin's house. She remembered feeling frightened, alone in the tunnel, with the figure approaching. It reached out a hand, and Kairi saw that it looked feminine. The figure was wearing a cloak. It pulled down the hood to reveal a woman, probably 16 or 17. She had long, brown hair and was medium height. Her eyes seemed to be covered by shadow. Kairi attempted to grab the woman's hand, but soon realized that this wasn't the woman's meant to do. Soon a keyblade appeared in her hand. Kairi gasped.
The woman said "Hm....I guess it works here too. Riku was......oh! Hello! Wow I...I mean YOU look so different!"
Kairi didn't understand. How did she know Riku? How did she have a keyblade?
Kairi then asked, "Who are you?"
"I am just....just a friend.", the woman responded.
At this point, the keyblade was gone. Kairi thought she must have made it disappear like Sora could.
"Why did you have a keyblade?" Kairi questioned.
"Oh...well...Riku gave it to me.", The woman answered.
"Riku??!! You know where Riku is?!", Kairi asked excitedly.
"Yeah....", The woman replied unsure, "Listen the reason I came here was to tell you something very important and you can't tell anyone else until I come back and say so. Got it?"
"Um....yeah." Kairi replied nervously.
"When your promise is fulfilled, a cloaked man will come and visit through the door in the secret place." The woman informed.
"You mean on the islands?" Kairi asked curiously.
"Yes.", the woman said, "He will offer you the choice of a way out or the journy onward. They will be presented in the form of a fruit and a bottled parchment. Now listen closely; no matter what the temptation, you must choose the fruit. Do you understand?"
"I guess so...but" Kairi looked down and said, "how will I know when this is?"
Kairi looked back up and saw that the woman was gone. Kairi then saw Arieth and Yuffie come down the stairs from Merlin's. Leon and Cid soon followed. They called Kairi over, and the five all left the tunnel together. Kairi looked back, and saw that the woman had re-appeared, but she was partly transparent. She soon faded completely away and Kairi turned around and continued onward.
Kairi walked across the bridge, over to the Paopu tree and sat down on it. Was this the promise the woman had mentioned? Sora had PROMISED to give back Kairi her charm. She didn't know what to think. In this situation, Kairi would normally ask Riku and Sora for advice, but she couldn't, because of the promise she had made to this woman. Kairi saw the gummi ship fly into the air, and set path for the Disney Castle. She was sad to see her friends go so soon. She hadn't been to involved sense she had remembered Sora, while talking to Selphie. She felt she didn't get to spend much time with them.
Kairi saw Sora emerge from the secret place, blushed. Kairi realized he must have seen the drawing Kairi made on the wall. Kairi remembered that this mysterious man the woman had talked about would be coming soon.
Later that night, Kairi headed into this dark cave and saw the knob-less door she had seen before re-appear. She walked up to the door and touched it. The door glowed and Kairi was knocked back. She opened her eyes and saw a black hooded figure. He looked down at her and said "Choose..." He held out one hand and it contained a paopu fruit. Kairi reached out to take it, remembering what the woman had said, when she saw the figure hold out another hand with a bottle. Inside was a letter. Kairi saw it had the King's seal on it. She knew she should take the fruit, because of what the woman said, but she thought that her friends might be in danger. She pulled her hand away from the paopu and grabbed the bottle. The black hooded figure vanished. Kairi looked down at the object in her hand and wondered if she had made the right choice or not. She had no time to ponder this anymore, because she had to tell Sora and Riku. She ran out of the cave and onto the beach.
After Kairi left, a figure emerged from the door. It uttered one, simple word. "Fool..."
End of Prologue
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« Reply #1 on Jul 25, 2006, 2:54pm » | |
I've already posted this on many other KH forums.
Here’s chapter 1...
“I…I don’t believe this!”
“What?! What’s it say?!” Kairi exclaimed.
“Come on! Tell us!” Riku added.
A teenage girl with flowing, brown hair stood beside a young man with wait hair, anxiously awaiting the reply of their dear friend. Standing in front of them, reading a brown piece of parchment, was a boy with spiky, chestnut hair, standing in shock.
“Well, out with it!” Riku said, unable to control himself.
An expression of horror filled the young man’s face, as he rolled the scrap of paper back up and forced it into a glass bottle he had dropped on the ground next to him. To figures stood before him, waiting for an answer as if they were searching for presents, Christmas morning. Sora felt his lower lip tremble.
“Maleficent…”
Dear Sora, Kairi, and Riku,
I hate to have to bother you guys with this, well, since we just got back and all. Golly, I sure do feel bad. After arriving home…
A small, feathered duck walked through the echoing halls of a bright castle. He held a staff with a hat on the end. He was followed by a tall, dog-like, creature, with a very goofy smile. He held a shield with an emblem, of what appeared to be, mouse ears. As the walked through the corridors, the goofy, faced animal broke the silence by saying…
“So Donald….how’s Daisy doing?”
“Uh…It sure is good to be back huh?” The creature urged.
“Well…Chip and Dale told me they’re really glad we’re all home.” The animal continued.
This tried Donald’s patience so he replied, with an almost incoherent series of quacks …
“Goofy please!!! I’m trying to think!”
“Uh…sorry Donald. What about” Goofy asked curiously.
“Just be quiet ya big galoof!” Donald replied angrily. “Aw….FINE! I’m just trying to think what we’re going to do now, since we defeated Xemnas and all.”
“Oh…I get it! You think the King’s not gunna need us anymore.” Goofy said with concern.
“NOOOO!!!!” The duck screamed, jumping up and down. “Come on, let’s just go greet the King.”
When they halted their movement, they had stopped at a huge door, that seemed like no one would be able to open it. The duck tapped it with his staff and a smaller door opened at the bottom. The duo entered the room.
“WHA!!!” Donald exclaimed.
The two thrones at the end of the hallway, were empty and a decline in the floor, led to a door, that was open. Donald and Goofy both raised their weapons and rushed to see what was happening. They entered the door to the Hall of the Cornerstone and saw an amazing site. The entire room was filled with magic. Spells and Charms literally floated in the air. Suddenly, brooms came to life and danced around the room. The two knew what this meant. Soon, they saw the King emerge from a rushing tide of water. He had on a red robe and a blue hat, with white stars on it.
“Goofy! Donald! Hurry!” The King ordered.
All three left the room a shut the door behind them. The heard crashes and booms, trying to break the door down.
“You know you can’t contain it for long, your majesty.”
The trio turned around and saw a tall, black robed woman holding a staff as tall as she was. She was accompanied by a big creature that looked like goofy, wearing armor.
“Maleficent! Pete! I should have known you were behind this!” The king exclaimed.
“Well, whatda you expect, Mickey, old pal?” Pete replied.
“Please forgive my foolish companion, your majesty . He can be rather rude.” Maleficent stated.
“Hey!” Pete yelled, offended.
“Quiet! Now…as you see, your castle is in grave danger,” Maleficent said. “but first you must be wondering how I survived. Well after I saved all of you from a swarm of those Nobody fools, a portal opened. I looked around and saw that the world was collapsing before my very eyes. I had no choice, but to enter. As I and the Buffoon emerged from the other side we were in the hall of the cornerstone. You don’t need to know anything else…all you need to know is that I control the power that wishes to destroy this world. So in order to keep you and you humble servants alive you must do as I say.”
Well Sora, I guess I’m kinda in a pickle huh? I have no choice, but to do as she asks. Hope you can understand. Sora, could you guys to a friend a favor? I need you to find Yen Sid and ask him to do me a favor. I need him to come help me out at the castle. Don’t worry though I already thought about hour gonna get there. Just take the token I attached to the letter and throw it in the ocean. I know it sounds silly, but you gotta trust me.
Thanks, pal[/i]
Sora held the token in his hand and tossed it out to sea. Soon it began to glow and before the gang’s very eyes, the coin turned into a gummi ship! Sora, Riku, and Kairi approached the ship and saw a note attached to the window. It read…
P.S. Bring preparations! You’re gonna need ‘em!
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« Reply #2 on Jul 26, 2006, 2:24am » | |
those are really good
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« Reply #3 on Jul 26, 2006, 3:01am » | |
cool story. write more!
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« Reply #4 on Jul 26, 2006, 2:12pm » | |
thanks everyone, i'll be writing more soon.
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« Reply #5 on Jul 26, 2006, 9:33pm » | |
great, cause ur story rocks.
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« Reply #6 on Jul 28, 2006, 6:03pm » | |
thanks, but your kind of spaming.
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« Reply #7 on Oct 30, 2006, 8:02pm » | |
wow! awesome fan fic!
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« Reply #8 on Oct 30, 2006, 8:42pm » | |
really? thanks! i wrote that this over my summer vaca. I haven't added to it in a while.
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« Reply #9 on Dec 12, 2006, 7:55pm » | |
i won't be adding to this anymore unless people REALLY want me to.
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